"She Dwelt among the Untrodden Ways" by William Wordsworth
She dwelt among the untrodden ways
Beside the springs of Dove,
A Maid whom there were none to praise
And very few to love:
A violet by a mossy stone 5
Half hidden from the eye!
--Fair as a star, when only one
Is shining in the sky.
She lived unknown, and few could know
When Lucy ceased to be; 10
But she is in her grave, and, oh,
The difference to me!
[1800]
Though only twelve lines long, William Wordsworth’s poem “She
Dwelt among the Untrodden Ways” is a moving piece, written about a most potent
feeling indeed, revealing a powerfully quiet and personal quality as well as an
elegiac tone through the voice of the first person speaker, as much of heart
and soul of the poem would be lost to a clinical third person narration. Throughout the poem, we learn much not only
about the object of the speaker’s love, but his own personal feelings as
well. We learn that the speaker’s love was a
beautiful woman who led a simple life by a small stream in northern England,
secluded and unknown to the rest of the world.
But we also learn why the speaker loved her: she was “like a violet by a
mossy stone,” untainted by the smog and sin of cities, and “fair as a star,
when only one/Is shining in the sky,” or pure as the light in the black of
night. The lover is so stricken by her
death that he visibly displays breathlessness and speechlessness (and, oh,/The
difference to me!). In fact, he is so overcome
with emotional angst that he has only the ability to procure a very short poem,
using only simple and concise diction and syntax throughout very short lines, just
over ten in number. Through this short but
deeply elegiac poem, the speaker summons every last ounce of poetic skill he
has to give a pure and simple eulogy for his pure and simple flower, who,
though he will not ever see again in life, will continue to be with him as one
more twinkling star, giving hope on a cloudless night.
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